On Writing
I was in the fifth grade when I learned how a single word can change the entire meaning of a sentence. Not the word necessarily, but how it is interpreted by the reader.
We were assigned the task of writing a one-page description of ourselves, both our physical attributes and our personality traits. The teacher planned to read them aloud to the class and we were to guess the author. The purpose, I now know, was to teach us descriptive writing. Fifth grade is a risky time for such an assignment. For one boy, it proved to be very embarrassing.
It was the sixties, when long hair for males was just coming in to fashion. Boys who wanted to be “cool” had longer hair. This particular boy described himself as having “pretty long” black hair. The guessing began with girls names. In fact, no one guessed a boy. That’s because the teacher, being a woman, read the sentence emphasizing the word “pretty.” Pretty was read in a way that would describe a female attribute. Long was read in an elongated fashion. We were looking for a classmate with pretty, long black hair.
When his name was revealed, the flustered boy tried vainly to explain that he meant “pretty long” as in “fairly long.” It was too late. The damage was done. He spent the rest of the year as the boy with the pretty, long black hair.
Lesson learned. People don’t necessarily read things the way you meant them, and we are wise to keep that in mind as we choose our words.
Around the Web this Week
My contribution to Care2’s Healthy and Green Living this week was titled Lie For Me, and is another example of reader interpretation. In this particular piece, I used a little “artistic license” to illustrate a point. The comments confirm that most readers understood and appreciated the emotion I was going for, but some took what I wrote quite literally and expounded on the topic of lies. I figured that would be the case prior to publishing, but decided it would be worth the confusion for the sake of what is, in fact, a sweet love story.
February 14 is Valentine’s Day, a day set aside to celebrate love and romance. It is not usually a day when we want to ponder our own mortality, but it also happens to be National Organ Donor Day. Valentine’s Day Gift of Life
While people are losing medical coverage and, along with it, access to care, Washington is keeping reform in the deep freeze, more concerned about the next election than with making progress. Health Insurer Defends 39 Percent Premium Increase
Obesity is estimated to affect an estimated five million young people in the United States alone. Studies are currently underway to evaluate laparoscopic adjustable gastric banding as a possible treatment option for adolescents. Gastric Banding Proposed for Obese Teens
Have you got style? If so, you probably don’t want to get caught using one of those old clunky metal canes. Fashionable Canes celebrates style with gorgeous decorative canes — check out their beautiful pink cane with a delicate rose!
Mary and Jenny, of Writing Without Periods, bestowed upon me the title of last Saturday’s “Sensational Woman.” Thank you, ladies. And the member spotlight was on yours truly this week at Women on the Verge, in one of their one-word answer interviews. It’s harder than it seems.
There’s a new feature on Care2 Causes. The Friday Wrap-up bundles all this week’s post in Causes, and the first installment packs quite the punch! Care2 Causes blogger Steve Williams definitely put some blood, sweat, and tears into piecing our work together. Thank you, Steve, for a job superbly done. This Week’s News and Views from Care2 Causes.
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